Before going into too much critical analysis of our yearbook thus far, I would like to comment on how pleased I was with the way staff members handled last week's meeting with Josten's representative Ms. Carina Alfano. I would especially like to recognize the lead roles taken on by Kevin Grimes, Jymisha Freeman, Crystal Ashley and Alexander Chow-Yen in making decisions regarding our cover.
Next, I would like to commend Mirissa on our current title page. I like how in contrast to our cover it incorporates our school colors. If I were to offer suggestions to improve it, they would be possible shots that include people and to alter the black bold outline around the banner shot. It's not that I object to the outline itself; however, it seems out of place/not uniform.
Anjelica's "Back to School" spread on pages 4 and 5 are off to a great start. I really like her choices of color and background. She also includes a wide variety of shots by type and by people.
"Teachers Gone Wild" on page 7 makes good use of the three-part caption; however, page 6 is obviously under-developed to non-existant. It might be fun to incorporate a page here in the vein of the New York Daily News or Post page 6 that is the celebrity gossip page; however, we must keep in mind that we do not want to turn-off any of our potential customers by using humor that is hurtful or offensive.
I will continue my analysis later. Please feel free to comment on my post.
Mr. Monahan , Thank you for my good comments on the cover page i made, and anything that the class wants to change i could change for them because i respect what they want
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